A paragraph of narrative, 100-150 words, in sentences of seven or fewer words. No sentence fragments! Each must have a subject and a verb
The night has to be it for me to have a heavenly good night sleep as these days I have been working like an over sized bee and moving all over the tiny island picking up passengers as they wave their godly to us arms to signal to us they need a lift and now I am drained out of my body and need a sleep and soon I heard a sound that nearly caused me to fall of the bed and clanking and thumping sounds were heard and I thought it was a thief and so I walked out of my room and went to investigate while my cat was still under my bed sleeping and my thoughts were right as it was a thief and the rest of the story would be in the hands of mine and so I held a yellow pages and went to whack out of the man in black who later I found out was my son who was trying to surprise me for my birthday and how embarrass I was.
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