Saturday, February 26, 2011

Online Lesson #4

a.(Sight) The picture of an army camp across my house. In the night, half of the army camp is in total pitch black while the other half lit by a 2 storey tall lamp post, lights in the rooms will go on and off repeatedly, barbed wires looked as sharp as the sharpest needles you could find. The building stand as tall as my condominium, made of red bricks and orange painted walls, it is one of the most weirdest looking building around.

b.(Hearing) The sound of the night is unique. With the constant firing of empty guns, it goes in the tune of many birds chirping repeatedly. Imitating the sound of the rapid rattling of the guns, I would make a tune out of it. Out of sudden, the "masters" of the camp would scream and yell so loud that I could hear them from my room.

c.(Sight) The design of that specific block, is like a "L" shape, directing all of the sound towards my home. Training in the night, the solders would navigate through tyres and obstacles.

d.(Sight) Green patches of damaged grass can be seen on the court and often, many of the soldiers were seen setting up tents to prepare for the night. Whether it is tedious or painful, our turn will come. (Hearing) Sometimes we can hear the sounds of army vehicles and men marching towards the streets.

Two Best Sentences(a and b)

a)In the night, half of the army camp is in total pitch black while the other half lit by a 2 storey tall lamp post, lights in the rooms will go on and off repeatedly, barbed wires looked as sharp as the sharpest needles you could find. The building stand as tall as my condominium, made of red bricks and white painted walls, like a Singapore flag. (metaphor)

b)The sound of the night is unique. With the constant frenzy firing of guns, it goes in the tune of many birds chirping repeatedly. Imitating the sound of the rapid rattling of the guns, I would make a tune out of it. Out of sudden, the "masters" of the camp would scream and yell so loud that I could hear them from my room. (illiteration)



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